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Secret Desire

To follow the contour of your entire body,
and feel each move you make.
Your naked flesh upon my skin,
causes a throbbing ache deep inside...
with mosit anticipation.

Yearning to feel the closeness of your body,
so close that it is impossible to tell where we
begin and end.

Oh, blissful relief to be taken into your arms at will.
To watch your eyes with mine as you enter me for the first time...
With a wild and beastly rhythm, ravished out of pure desire.

To feel your animal-like movement of muscle against my naked flesh.
Pleasure ever building with each move of your hips.
Uncontrollable urges...
To make these words more than mere fantasy!


For slowly my mind is creating nights for which actualization is ludicrous.
But better still is the ongoing picture in my head...
created - changed - manipulated
until it is perfect and perfectly real!

You must know how badly I ache for you?
How could not?
How could you ignore?

Please come to me as if a dream
force your sexual will upon me
take me in a way which I have never known
and do it now!
For I need it desperately.

Author notes

This one is as sporatic as my thoughts were when I feverishly scribbled it down on paper.  My thoughts were wilding racing and it shows in the tone shifts throughout the piece. It is my first erotica or adult piece, though so please go gently on it

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  • Boricua149
    September 12, 2007
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    I can't really comment like I would like to right now but on Friday I will.

  • Boricua149
    September 11, 2007
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    I'll see you in your sleep...


    • screamingsilently
      September 11, 2007
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      Cute!

      This one was edited before I posted it on here (at the urging of another member)...it still sounds kinda stupid to me when I read it again, and yet I leave it on here anyway! What a conundrum! Thanks for the comment though, I would have really liked to hear what you thought about it, but I will take what I can get. I am glad that you joined...now I can read your stuff too! I am going to add you to my favorites if that is okay

      • Boricua149
        September 12, 2007
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        Cool

        Please do add me. I have company from Utah here until Friday. You are forever on my mind.


  • RainDripsBlood
    August 5, 2007
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    wow paints an image

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