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Fuck You

Fuck You, you filthy fucking slut
Finding out about you, was a kick in the gut
For five years, I had been so true
Devoting my life, and love to you
  Like being hit head on, by a fucking big truck
  Knowing you, and my best friend, got together to fuck
  He is no friend, the cunt, is an arsehole
  And you  bitch, a filthy, dirty, fucking mole
You sneaky, bloody bitch, you could not even tell
A stranger had to tell me, so go and rot in hell
Go away with that fucker, move to another town
May your chook eggs turn to emus, and kick your dunny down
  You are lucky, that I told you, in this poem, I have wrote
  Coz if I see you, I`ll cut your scrawny, fucken throat
  And if I see that cunt, friend, I may end up in jail
  I promise I will kill him, I promise not to fail
So you pair, of misery, gutted cunts, stay away from me
I honestly thought, you would love me, till eternity
Hopefully, you will be happy together, you rotten fucking two
If your not, stiff shit, coz all I`ve to say is, FUCK YOU
  Yes Fuck you bitch, and Fuck that fucking jerk
  It was because I loved you, that I had to work
  To pay for our wedding, and our planned honeymoon
  Thankfully, I found out about you, and never to soon
At least I have some savings, To start a new life
I would not, want you bitch, to be my fucking wife
Now Fuck off, out of my life, you have now set me free
Fuck You, and him too, Yeah fuck off, Go to Buggery   

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Very angry Adult, Abuse with lots of swearing

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  • Palaz1wp
    October 7
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    I like it a lot had a lot of pain


    • goat1826
      October 7
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      You like pain?
      Just joking
      Glad you liked it
      Thank You


  • SheWolfNLust silver member
    October 7

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    wow so full of feelings, That happened to me too and I still hold a mix of feelings and I dont think i have ever fully gotten over what he did too me, I wish you much luck in the contest xoxo


    • goat1826
      October 7
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      Thank You
      Its not the best feeling is it?
      It was how I felt, full; of anger lol


  • echo-ink
    January 26
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    Whew!
    Well, I'd offer to wash your mouth out with soap, but...um...your in a soar mood, so I'll forgo that,
    I take it you were just a tad pissed off about the whole thing, and I don't blame you.
    I hope you get over your heartache.
    This had a ton of anger and emotion, hehehe to say the least.
    Good luck in the contest.


    • goat1826
      January 26
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      Well I`m over it now lol
      She has gone and I`m happy

  • starving-to-survive
    January 21
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    Wow, you are angry! this is amazing. Your pain and anger is so evident and rightly so! i think i would be just as angry.
    I am so sorry you had to go through this. Every word here is just brilliant. Your word choice is impecable. You have so much talent.
    Thank you so much for entering my contest and i hope you find peace.


    • goat1826
      January 21
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      With the sort of support you are giving me
      I`m sure to get over it soon lol
      Thank You for your kind comments

  • cindyloo
    January 10

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    Definately a lot of anger here. I like this. There is nothing like a bunch of f-words to relieve some tension and steam. Hope you felt better after writing this. Good luck!

  • fanniesson
    April 8, 2008
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    a classic is born


  • Electric Sunrise gold member
    December 7, 2007
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    Firstly, let me say apologies for the late judgement of this contest,

    This strikes me as more than an angry rant than a piece of poetic work, the profanity downgrades it terribly. The emotion is present, but thats just not enough.

    Thanks for the entry all the same,


  • ultimate beluga
    November 11, 2007

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    hmm i like this, though the overuse of fuck (and the use of the c word) make me feel like this doesnt really belong in my contest, but i wont DQ it because it's actually not bad thanks heaps for entering!


  • Tarja
    October 19, 2007

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    Congrats on the silver and the bronze trophies. This reminded me of the song, Don't Want You Back. Have you ever heard it? I think even though it's a little poppy, you'd find it amusing.

  • xTomorrowx
    October 9, 2007

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    this is really good, a lot of anger shown in this one, great write, and although i don't usually like a lot of swearing i liked this poem =)
    thanks heaps for entering and good luck in my contest! =)


  • Glasyalabolas
    September 14, 2007
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    From reading this, sounds like typical Aussie sentiment (and language) to me, and this is no bad thing, especially when it comes to a personal rant.

    Full steam ahead, honest, visceral and you can't beat that when it is needed.

    Good write and congrats on silver.


  • Billythekid
    September 1, 2007
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    I love the pic BTW.

  • Billythekid
    September 1, 2007

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    Nice. This is fucking great.I caught my ex in bed with my fucking brother and yeah.. if I ever see him again I'll cut his dick off.


  • TrixieOne
    August 29, 2007

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    Wow. Powerful write. I'm sorry that happened but your right- you can start over, she didn't go from cheating girlfriend to cheating wife, and FUCK HER!!! Striking and emotional. Love it.


  • BaByMaMa
    August 6, 2007
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    wow... maybe you two should have make up sex lol!!! haha only kidding good poem though

  • trace3grls
    August 5, 2007
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    this is so emtional and true good on you fuck her......


  • everthesame
    August 5, 2007
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    WOW! I loved this is was so powerful and so full of emotion. This was great one of my favorites. But unfortunaly you did not add into you author nothes you AP SN please do this or I will have to delete you and I really wouldn't want to. Thank you for your entry and good luck


    • goat1826
      August 5, 2007
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      I`m glad u liked it,I may seem stupid but i`m new at this ,what is AP and SN ? i did read it all

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