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Twilight

Brutally tearing open grey cavity revealing the sweet dark heart.
Ripping and shreading astral death.
Plump cool liquid oozes down
with a single bite as howls of victory over preditor
turned prey. 
Hunted down in glory with misery misunderstood.
I am the shadow, that which waits in the dark for fools in the twilight. 

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  • Griswold gold member
    August 12, 2007

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    Oh, I like this. Very well done quickie indeed. Great job on garnering the shiney in this contest...Scott


  • penman gold member
    August 4, 2007
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.