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Morning

The lone white cloud slips,
Through the limitless skies,

The wind dances,
Through the grass bedewed,

The sun takes,
The earth in it's hand,

And greets,
The morning with a kiss.

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  • PureCountry
    September 8, 2007

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    Wonderful Imagery

    Thank You for sharing this. It is direct yet powerful in its statement. keep Up Your writing, you portray wonderful points in short simple ways.


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    August 15, 2007
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    Absolutely lovely and tranquil