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Seasons

Here, and then they're gone
Rich and fragrant in their time
Shed tear leaves of love.

Author notes

A haiku is a seventeen syllable Japanese Poem three lines long with the form of five syllables in the first and third line and seven syllables in the second.

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Written for AP's Next Top Poet, Round Three
THIRD PLACE WINNER.

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  • HarvesterOfHearts
    August 17, 2007

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    loved it again

    i love it also! so simple (as all haikus) but so powerful. my favourite is the first line.. very straightforward very true!


  • Foxydaze14
    August 14, 2007
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    Beauitful imagery. I really like this and enjoyed it


  • Dlvvanzor
    August 4, 2007

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    I love haikus, and I love this one. It's rare to find an actually good haiku, but now I have. ^_^ Great job!

    Love you sis,
    -Dlvvanzor