It started out with a smile
Then turned to a kiss
Then you left
You're all I miss
You came back
And told me
That you love me
And I'm all you see
We hung out together
And I didn't have fears
You healed the pain
And dried my tears
We may hit some rough times
Along the road called love
But we'll get through it
Thanks to God above
It's like we're living
In a teenage fairytale
I want to be together
And us to never fail
Author notes
This was written to my friend who is experiencing true love for the first time. I'm so excited for her
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GOOD TIMING FIrst one in I love it though it flows well and it's very cute and i can relate because i've finally fallen in love truelly as well^^good ryhming too, i know thats hard! Good luck
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Very beautiful! It's such a wonderful feeling to be in love. Especially when it is your first time. You can only hope that the road ahead although long, will be just as wonderful as it was the first time that you both met. Living a fairytale romance is something that we have all dreamed of and very few of us ever find. Wonderful work with this one. I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks a lot for sharing this here!
Jeremy0826 -
I like the short stanza's [=
And the reconising troubles in the road of love.
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I wrote this for my friend, but now I'm starting to experience it
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Excellent poem
This was very good, I like rhyme and write mostly poetry that rhyme. To be of such a young age, you put your words together well and with much thought. Now adays many people tend to avoid old school rhyme but this is very good and has meaning.
"BOO"
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this is so sweet and i wish this for me and my boyfriend. great poem. it was really cute.
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I like the flow in it. The imagery is cute. This had a good rythym to it. Very creative. Bravo! Good luck in the contest!
Jackie ♥
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