Your cryptic words
Roll of your twisted tongue
You sing songs of love and longing
But the song sung back to you
Falls upon deaf ears
You twist the truth
Of who, what, and where
Fitting it all to your design
Of cryptic selfishness
Hidden behind cryptic lies
In a far away place
With blood on her hands
A girl mourns her love for you
One that you cannot stand
Your cryptic life rejects it
Cryptic, though you are,
You are translucent
Stripped of all pretenses
Your compassion, lies, and sorrows
Are lost on me
Feel shame in your
Naked body
In all that you have done
And will never do
Who you will never love
You want to act and
It will suit your cryptic
Delusions well
Hide behind a character
A story already foretold
The story ahead for you
Will unfold in cryptic lines
Of deceit and lies undone to you
Karma
Will be cryptically yours
Author notes
Though cryptic in it's words, the meaning is quite clear.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Redundant and disturbing. I don't know why you would ever consider picturing me naked.
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"Feel shame in your
Naked body"
^^^ That does not imply I thought of you nude.
The point of the poem was to be redundant. Disturbing? No. Truthful? Yes.
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"Karma
Will be cryptically yours"
I remember when this was written... Oy.
But you channelled my rage.
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ouch
Your poem is sharp like a knife....in a delightfull manner....reading this was riveting in design, and envoked "emotion"......thank-you for breaking the ice of creativity. good job.
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