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Lollie Pop










Tongue ring clicks against her lollie
Swirling while she mimics actions
She will soon preform upon the thickness
That thrusts from his mass of curls
Her eyes dance with the wicked anticipation
of replacing the sweet for the sweat
Thoughts twist like the phalic symbol
Between her lips he'll find a taste of Heaven
Pleasures found only this side of Hell
The horns just keep her halo up












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can't add the pic to the piece but I love it.

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    August 4, 2007

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    Now that's the kind of "sucker" I'm talking about. LOL, nicely done take on the prompt.

    Thank you for entering and good luck
    Storm

  • sandsdagger
    August 4, 2007
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    nice

    i liked this it was vey erotic and i hav used lolly pops lots in sex play,

    good job with this one.