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\\Cement:

Wandered into the moonlight
To test the waters of the
Cold.
  Hard.
  Stone.

I wanted to watch you drift away
In a cement box laid in
a raft that was much too weak
To hold us both.

I stood on the shore and waved
Farewell
To your cement box
Disappearing into the water

On the horizon.

As your silhouette faded forever.

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