Rhymed verse embraces a shadowed heart
miles beyond the ocean, we stand, far apart.
Within magical shadows, of a moonlit night,
there shone upon us both, a beaming light.
In a magical song of the sun and moon,
sung friendship fairies in a hearts tune.
Through a seasonal changing breeze,
secrets of dreams whispered in the trees.
In a beautiful garden, of a deserted dream,
two souls floated down a lonely stream.
In a garden, where forgotten waters flow,
dreams intwined under a forming rainbow.
With stars shining a paths new direction,
daydreamed thoughts in the seas reflection.
Within a blossomed, tall standing rose,
grows a friendship that a dream only knows.
A garden blooms in the magic of night,
dreams meet in a little moon birds flight.
Dancing souls in a light of a bright star,
shadows of the moon drifting from afar.
Paths now turn where friendship does belong,
in enchanting tunes, dreamlands inticing song.
A rose sways and grows in this garden of love,
a light shines on us from the singing stars above.
(thanks for the wonderful friendship)
Author notes
for Polly
A contest entry
- BFF - FRIENDS to the END! by x Star Dust x.
500 points, ended August 19, 2007, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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WOW excellant write. The structure is strong, the rhyming is right on, the flow rolls off your tongue so naturally. Nice job!
Thanks for entering my contest, you did a great job!

