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The Place I Left Behind

No more memories in that place
It's all what I try to erase
Forget the pain that held us there
There's only so much I can bear.

I try now to forget the laughter
It was not our happy-ever-after
Just a place we once called home
But it left us on our own.

Empty walls scream pain to me
I hope that no one else will see
What this life has cost
How the leaving makes us lost.

Author notes

this is really rough, but I'm now sure I want to work with it anymore because when I wrote it it was all pretty raw, and now I've stepped out of the situation and am able to see things more clearly so I can't seem to think how to get the thoughts conveyed across more clearly.
Anyhow, thats sort of a long notation but feel free to suggest help, I might still come back and fix this.

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