Have you fulfilled your dreams?
Looked up to the sky,
Asked the lord to forgive you,
And sometimes asked why?
Have you searched your soul,
For answers untold?
Have you read the book,
Of more than 2000 years old?
Do you say your blessing,
Before each meal everyday?
Do you refuse to say sinful words,
You know you should never say?
If you answered no to all these questions,
Then you better be counting your blessings.
If you were to leave this world today,
Where would you go,
And what would Jesus say?
HEAVEN or HELL???
Author notes
8♥ Write about anything you want
A contest entry
- Write, Write, Write!! by xCandieKissesx.
450 points, ended August 6, 2007, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pre-write Party ~ Closes In One Day by Namita.
300 points, ended October 1, 2007, 90 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Powerful and sterong. Gripping.
Luv,
Candy
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This is powerful, I think I'm heading down under! Great poem!
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I like the imagery in this one. It is very creative clever with a good flow. Bravo! Best wishes to you in the contest!
Jackie ♥
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