Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Fallen Forever

When you feel your all alone
remember,
there is always someone
out there, somewhere,
your true soulmate
waiting for the moment
to take that step
just one inch
one tiny motion
until they have
fallen forever
into your arms.

Author notes

'.'

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    October 3, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    True and beautiful.


  • Lauren Noir
    August 18, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    This is beautiful

    I loved the meaning, it's something I'd love on my wall
    The beautiful meanings and the inner body was so beautiful
    And it really was a true thing
    It's something you can remember in a dark hour

    You wrote it wonderfully
    It really seemed to flow beautifully

    The fallen forever bit was genius
    Well done

    Good luck
    And thanks for entering


    • Stingersinger53 gold member
      August 19, 2007

      Edit | Reply
      Thank you, what a nice comment!
      I hope you find what your looking for in your contest!
      Hugs!!!
      Cayla