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Love's Symphony

Melody between satin sheets,
breathless scores to rise and fall.
Symphonies in harmony,
playing one for the other;
stringed duo flexibly taught.

Resonate the chambers,
under moonlit caress,
his bow sliding to her tune.
Building crescendos in passion's play,
the final curtain falls;
reaching for an encore
in thunderous roars.

Author notes

Prompt: thunderous ovations

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  • Tangled Angle
    August 4, 2007

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    Wow, this was really good.
    I'm impressed.
    I've seen you around, but I don't recall ever checking out your poems.
    Great stuff. You should enter some of my contests.


  • Idle Mind Wondering silver member
    August 4, 2007
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    Make me what to dance.

    nice job!


  • Celticmoon silver member
    August 4, 2007

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    Now of course we all know where your mind is, don't we? As always your words stir those sensual areas of the soul one just cannot ignore. Thank you for entering and good luck!

    Blessings
    Bel

    • StormGoddess Greeters member
      August 4, 2007
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      Hey, I am just AP's horny toadette in disguise, lol. Thanks for the silver, glad you enjoyed.

      Storm

  • delightfulmess silver member
    August 4, 2007

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    OOOO La LA this was a fantastic take on the prompt
    Well done

    ~Delila


  • Celticmoon silver member
    August 4, 2007
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    Your prompt is: Thundrous Ovations

    Or


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