When I had no one
You took my hand and became my friend
When I saw darkness
You showed me the light within myself
When I was confused
You spun me round and made it better my making it worse
When I was happy
You smiled with me content to just bask in my joy
So my friend
When you need me to take your hand
To light up your life
To make you dizzy and
To share your happiness
I will be there
No matter what
Because you always were...
Author notes
This is about the friends that most of us are so lucky to have. The ones that make you smile when you are already happy, the ones who make you smile when you are sad, the ones who smile just to show that they love being with you.
Thank you for smiling
A contest entry
- BFF - FRIENDS to the END! by x Star Dust x.
500 points, ended August 19, 2007, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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very simple poem, stays true to what it is. good job, keep writting
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I have some friends like this.. and try to be that friend often, though I'm not sure I suceed sometimes... bravo.
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aww...how sweet is that
Nice write hun
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You get two thumbs up from me! Nice job! Excellent write!
Thanks for entering my contest, it was well said.
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