We go through this cycle again and again.
We make up and break up.
This'll never end.
We fight, we hate eachother with all our might.
And then we make it right.
We always find our way back to eachother.
No matter how much we pretend,
There will never be another.
So tell me now, how many times should we fall in love?
The answer is something you said to me once.
Love never dies, it wont burn out.
A contest entry
- Simple and easy by Cwm.
300 points, ended August 8, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
no lies, no lies.
Comments
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Decent
It's straight up, straight forward, and decently written. I'd do a better review if I wasn't tired right now. But, yea, it's got the feeling of confusion in it. Decent.
-Weston
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aww I like this sweetie. who's is about?
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we need fo really fall in love once, but then to fall for that one over and over again
Riftkin
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