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Not complete..my water leaked in my bag,.had to save my writings before they disolve

Its a dangerous place they say
to set hope in things that change
but im praying for that change of ways
that will stabalise my feelings

He didnt seen it coming
See it fading or catch its collapse
i did'nt realise i was floating
whilst lying on my back

He met me in the middle
invited me to stay
drove holes of nothing into me
oh its a dangerous place they say


These days i laze
a mess of ways
i fought to keep
a steady stride
now stilled by love
my heart ablaze
ablaze by stake
im burnt alive.



i ate melodies and
choked them into
puddles by your feet
i prayed for hours but it seems
the deaf dont hear my pleas
so come on world enlighten my
cos this temptation frightens me

when will you spin and set my heart
into a steady beat?











these days i laze
a mess of ways
i fought to keep a steady stride
now stilled by love my heart ablaze
ablaze by stake
im burnt alive

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