these eyes shed many tears
no one cares about my pain
my mom, dad, friends
all victims of my hate
i don't want to hate
but love is lost in my life
i've tried to love
and no one loves back
i've given up on this life
i hate it so much and no one cares
if i'm dead, alive, missing
they could care less
the pain inside is growing fast
growing stronger with voices
their telling me to let go
not to hold on- yet i see some hope
i close the bottle and set it down
i sit up in bed and look around,
hoping to feel different-
not just hoping, but wanting
I'm bleeding deep inside,
and no one cares.
Not my mom, dad, friends.
Not even I.
August 11th, 2006
Author notes
I had a few poems on an old account and I finally remembered the password so I can move them from that account to this one.
Hope you like them.
A contest entry
- ♥ Letters ♥ by Atrophya.
600 points, ended August 28, 2007, 34 entries
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Comments
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I'm kind of seeing a trend with your poems.........love, pain, sadness, regret, loss, no hope...
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Wow, you really put alot into this. It's breathtaking, I've felt this way before and I hope you feel better, I hope the pain doesn't consume you. Much love and I'm here if you ever need someone.
GL in the contest.
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