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Energy Bursts

Bursts of excitement,

      wide eyes a warning

of a caffeinated

disaster.

      Energy surrounds~~

wild times.

A contest entry

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  • nichtmich silver member
    January 20, 2008

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    Hilarious! A very funny poem, that's what caffeine does to me Like the funny little pictures on the side too, they emphasize the message of the piece. Good form, no critiques here!

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    January 15, 2008
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    thanks for entering.
    Good luck.


  • Riftkin gold member
    August 4, 2007
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    wow that was a great take on my prompt


  • Riftkin gold member
    August 4, 2007
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    Prompt Caffeine