a little girl
helpless and small
watching
everything burn
flames eating skin
little did she know
her older self
watching in the shadows
laughing at her pain
years later
she became that girl
a killer
a demon
a princess of darkness
hiding from darkness
was never easy
try to run
she will find you
the milady daemon
once just like you
small and scared
she doesnt care
she doesnt remember her past
only looking now
for blood
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Twisted Fairytales! Yay!!! Come in and see by LadyOfFate.
600 points, ended August 19, 2007, 18 entries
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Fantastic! wonderful write! kind of freaky though ^_^ How a kid is brought up or a big event in the kids life can really make them go insane, even today it happens just not as bad as them turning into demons and thirsting for blood, but still very good write! thanks for entering!
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this is a really great write really catchy!! I enjoyed reading it and im sure others will too!! thanks for entering and best of luck!!! Keep writing
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I agree. This is a very deep write. I enjoyed your spacing. Good Job!
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I like the formate of this poem!!!!!!!! Few caps. and void punct., I love this style, but have trouble pulling it off completely!!!!!!!!! You did a great job with it however!!!!!! Good luck on the contest!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Very interesting, I like it!
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WOW. Deep and i like it
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