my tears fall upon
a photograph of you
clouds hide the sun
Author notes
Option 3
A contest entry
- Haiku (options) by star wars fanatic.
450 points, ended August 19, 2007, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Very vivid and sad, though something familar, I too have so often felt. Thanks for entering and keep up the great work!
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This was certainly sad and reaching with emotion of loss...very well done!
~tia
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