When the world erodes,
and there is nothing left,
won't we be sad that we left
all those coffee stains
and candy wrappers
littered like an old Sunday newspaper?
Author notes
It's short. But it's my personal philosophy.
A contest entry
- gasoline freckles & a purple moon: pick a prompt or prewrite. by DancingRed.
300 points, ended August 12, 2007, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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you sadi your into song writing? i think you could take this and make it into a really cool song!
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ooooooooo... I love the images you created... I could agree no more!!!
What an interesting write.
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The good news: I love your poem. The images work so well and create a beautifully forlorn atmosphere.
Mmm, I guess we will be sad we didn't get out and do something more with life. Is that what you're getting at?
Thanks for entering.
DancingRed.
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