The orange almost stained the page.
Until the chill drained down,
And there was dark.
The warm breeze sweeps away,
The glow remains.
For her,
The realisations that night brings,
Shine brighter then day.
Author notes
a quick little poem; not sure if i used the right words.
A contest entry
- Poems for my wall by Lauren Noir.
650 points, ended August 31, 2007, 83 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please let me know if the word choice is okay. thankyou.
Comments
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This.Was.Fantastic
Why is there only one comment?
This I don't undertsand
The piece was so deep and complex, with every line depicting beauty
The poetic devices you used were perfect, just amazing
I saw such a vivid picture, it was perfectly placed
The words were perfect
There was no cliche and no rubbish. Just amazing poetry
Well done, good luck and thanks for entering
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great!
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