I want to be to good to be true
i want to swim in your eyes
bath in your soul
castiron light
make you my goal.
i want to reach for the heavens
reach for the stars
but they dont compare
when your in my arms.
i fade into nothing
fade into black
when i seem lost forever
you pull me back.
i want to be to good to be true
for you,
my beauty, sunset angel.
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for Thedamned77 with all my love.
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this is beautifully written! great work!
I love it! (STILL WISHING SOMEONE WOULD WRITE SOMETHING LIKE THIS FOR ME... haha.) keep up your great work!
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Wonderful
This seems that it should be a song/lyrical approach. Maybe with an added repetition of a verse, it really could be.
This is a gorgeous write, angels and the darkness that will radiate light.
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this one is very touching. loving, simple, sweet and enchanting all at once. its so nice to see people in love with life and eachother.
bravo.
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ooh beautiful poem! it makes you think about everything that's going in around your heart.
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MARRY ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love you eternalsyn16! You are my romeo. I think i'll just fall into your arms
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