Take my hand and lead the way;
tell me all you want to say.
Whisper softly in my ear,
all those things I want to hear.
Kiss my lips and touch my skin;
bring out passions deep within.
Pull me close and hold me near;
take away my pain and fear.
In the darkness of the night,
be my beacon, shine your light.
In the brightness of the sun,
show me that you are the one.
Give me wings so I can fly;
for I can soar when you're nearby.
Enter my heart, break down the wall,
it's time for me to watch it fall.
I've been a prisoner, can't you see?
Break my chains and set me free.
Strip me of my armor tight;
you'll find I won't put up a fight.
Release my soul held deep within . . .
I'm ready now, let love begin.
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I LOVE RAYNE SO MUCH!!!!
Please tell me what you think
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wow
damn anthony you have some kind of beautiful mind to come up with something so deep as this ... wow i mean damn i wish i felt this way toward some one .... nothing like this ever seems to happen with me ... just sex and nothingness... i wish i had love ... lol haha there goes little emo whitney HAHAHHA anyways good piece loved it
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anthony very good i can see you have finally gotten me off your mind to bad this is how i feel about you even if i cant bring my self to brake up with cory but hey i have a girlfriend her name is desiree shes cute and i go to school with her shes kool well good luck with everything hope you are happy love you Ashley
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i really love this poem
even though i don't know 4 sure that u still feel like this i know @ 1 point u did and that is y i love it still 2 this day!!!!!!!!! -
wonderful
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brill piece of work thanks for sharing from irene
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i love you too baby!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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i love you
anthony i love you so much that words cannot even begin to express it. thank you so much for all that you do for me and will continue to do for me. with all my love RAYNE Elizabeth -
Very good
Flowing like water I thought it won't stop, but abruptly it did. A good rhyming poem very pleasant to read.
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im glad you liked it...it ended exactly at the right moment...at the strongest most meaningful line!!!
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My friend, I said in appreciation and not in deprecation. All good things are too good to last long and your poem is one of them.
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i know u meant it in a good way...lol...thnx again bro
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Awesome!
omg! Wow! I've just gotten done reading a perfect love poem! But this was just as equaly as great! The flow and rhyme was perfect! The sentences rolled off my tongue sooo smoothly. I really enjoyed reading this piece, it also seemed very natural. Great job! Oh, and P.S. - Your name is hilarious! lol.
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