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Alone

Alone is all i have,
Alone i'll make it work,
I'll pull myself together
and go above and beyond
all expectation and hope.
What they all expect of me.
No more falling in a heap,
not one more night crying myself to sleep
because i'm better than that,
i'm stronger than that
and now your all going to see
the better side of me.

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A piece i wrote a few months ago

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  • buffy02
    November 1, 2007
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    wonderful darlin.... i think this should be our motto... thanku and i'm so glad and proud that u have decided to share ur poetry, now every one can see how talented u are like i've told u all along... xoxo


  • angel-lover
    November 1, 2007
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    this is a very well written piece thank-you for sharing your work on allpoetry.


  • oneal
    October 15, 2007

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    Hi Rachy,

    My expectations of you is the very best in all that you do, my dear. So show me this side of you and let us smile together under a warm sunset.

    your friend

    Oneal

  • buffy02
    August 13, 2007

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    thanku for finally sharin your poerty with us rach... i like this one cause u no i can relate... xoxo