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Yours to have

Lay down that weight that you bare,
I will carry it away.
Close your eyes for a moment,
I will wake you when it's day.

Let me be your light,
to your endless night.
Let me be your eyes,
When you seem to lose sight.

And I will hold onto you,
I promise you this much.
I will carry you,
You can feel it in my touch.

Give me your fears,
I will hold them at bay.
Give me your dreams,
I will make them stay.

Give me your hopes,
I will set them to fire.
Give me all that you've got,
I will give what you desire.

And I will be your rock,
When things fall apart.
Don't you see it love?
I won't break your heart.

I am yours to have forever,
Don't you see it now?
You are my very being,
How much will you allow?

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  • carrying a cross
    September 11, 2007

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    great!

    Aww...this one is sweet! your poetry has so much feeling. I get jealous sometimes! Anyway, I love you, and I want you to continue writing for as long as you can!

  • hurtgurl
    August 4, 2007
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    Beautiful piece of work you have here i like it