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Quakie's Quickie Confession

I must confess
here on the street
I think
I should have passed.

I may not be at all
cut out
to writing
poems so fast

I've never tried-
I wanted
to finally get the nerve-
Now here I am- I'm choking!

Just kick me to the curb. . .



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  • sheltered
    August 4, 2007
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    But that's fuckin Chandler for ya.... Biatch


  • sheltered
    August 4, 2007
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    Whatever the case I think the host is ignorant ...not to even offer a comment.

  • sheltered
    August 4, 2007

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    I think kick me in the ass might have worked better but then again that would have been total cliche... lol
    I feel it.


  • grannyeri gold member
    August 4, 2007

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    Takes a while to get the hang of these quickies - won't be long and you'll be winning as well - good attempt - keep writing.