I want to tear you apart;;
[worthless.]
I want to choke the chaos out of your throat & make you vomit up the deceit that’s hovering between your fangs;;
[liar.]
I want to watch you collapse, the way loosely scripted lies always do, when you hit them where it hurts;;
[repulsive.]
You have taken everything worth caring about, & I will hate you until I see you in hell, but I will N E V E R ask for it back.
[thief.]
I hate you more than I E V E R loved you;;
[disgusting.]
&& nothing would please me more than to watch you explode into little, disgusting, comet-like stars of shit; ( the stench would suit you, but even -that- would be too pretty of a demise for a coward like you; )
[you are nothing.]
Author notes
uhm. I hope you can hear the rage. I felt it when I wrote it. but it's... idk. feel free to DQ it, I won't be offended.;
A contest entry
- 3 Part Contest: Part 1- Rage [[BIG POINTS]] by GiftedPsychosis.
1500 points, ended August 7, 2007, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I feel rage too, similar to yours.
you fucking bastard [i hate you so much it kills me sometimes]& yet, I know that its you who should burn in hell...yeah, that's the way I am with him, trust me. He's lied, hurt me and made me look a fool...he'll pay.
great write honey -
No, no, I won't DQ this one. I can see the rage, it's a good poem.
Good job and good lcuk in the contest! -
brilliant...
that- would be too pretty of a demise for a coward like you; )
[you are nothing.]
and yes, I can feel the rage. but it's good rage.
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Oh yeah, that rage comes through loud and clear - a little bit angry are we? LOL They say the there is a very fine line between love and hate and it looks like you have stepped over it when it comes to this person.
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oh I didn't step over it... I fucking BURIED it.
haha. thanks for the comment!
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