Throbbing words penetrating your mind
Your thoughts race like the blood flowing to your head
A slight tickle of my tongue on the roof of your mouth
I tickle the sides of your pelvic bone
And a mad shudder makes my fingers twitch against your velvet skin
You exhale sharply into my shoulder
You beg me to stop
But when I ask you if thats what you really want
You admit that you were lying
Can you feel my fingernails...
Slowly running their way up your back?
My hot sweet breath in your ear
Describing exactly what I'll do to you
It's torture, isn't it?
But you love it, I can tell
When I make you scream like a little girl into my skin
Because you're afraid my parents in the next room will hear.
How you throw me on to my bed
And for hours we don't stop
Sweating, silently screaming
Kisses on every place of your body
My fingers tangled in your hair
You use my underwear to tie me to the bed
I can tell I am in for it now
The way that ravenous look in your eye
Is perfectly reflected by the full moonlight
Its not a surprise
When you start working me in the ways you know make me insane
How you know exactly what to do to make me scream
I smile as I watch that look on your face
When my fingernails hit that little fleshy part under your buttcheecks
Complete extacy
I can hear your breath as you sing sweetly into my ear your lusts and cravings
You want every piece of me, I can see it
The way you make my breasts quiver at the touch of a cool fingertip
Or a warm tongue
You close your eyes and throw back your head as everything falls into motion
And your body begins to fall into itself
With the slow twisting and the fast heartbeat
You never want to stop
And neither do I
Continuously coming
The beast of the orgasm rears its lovely head
Pushes through the shadows
As you burry my head in a pillow and whisper how we can't be too loud
I push my voice into a hushed scream
As we finish you brush my hair from my black eyelashes
We lay together nude for a brief moment
And I can feel the hearbeat pounding in your still hardened bottom reigions
And you tell me how comforting the smell of my cigarettes is
The candles burn to a dimming flame and extinguish
The wax running down the center of my bra soon washes away
And the night screams of desire lull themselves into a sense of security yet again
And there they rest
But not for long
Please tell me what you think
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AMAZING, the way you start off then dive right in, wonderfully written!!! Loved every second of it!
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You start off using two of my favorite words ; throbbing and trickle . bonus points haha
I love the flow of the poem, it reminds me of a rushing stream- rapid with a strong under current. "
And there they rest
But not for long"
Your last two lines cement that image in my mind by letting my gasp for breath and realize I needed the rest. Powerful stuff you've written .
Great read thanks so much for sharing it with us.
Keep penning
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I really really like this. The imagery is good and the ending leaves you wanting more. "The way that ravenous look in your eye Is perfectly reflected by the full moonlight" the picture this brings to mind is AMAZING. the poem manages to be erotic without being trashy. good work and keep writing.
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I though you were a Y chromosome for the first half of piece, but could that have been intentional?
And oh my, you're making miss my lover. He's back October 28th, and I could just about die some nights.
Well written, well desribed - not identical to my own experiences, but there are parallels.
Keep Penning,
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Wow, a fantastically penned story of lust and passion. I really enjoyed this, beautifully imagery and vibrant emotion. Very good work, keep it up
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I take it you like MCR? (the name) The poems really good, well done!
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This was interesting. This gave my mind pause to wander and speculate and draw various conclusions and thoughts of my own. I like when another’s work does that for me. It shows many sides to your talent. Keep that pen handy and continue to share your work with us here at Allpoetry!
♥ Touchof1der
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