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crisp

burn the feathers
and watch them fall
they collide and crash
cascading in flight unmatched
floating down, drifting far
withering and showing scars
unsatisfied and reclaimed
repossessed and
adequately named

take in the smoke
let it fill your lungs
while soft words clot
on the back of your tongue
let intentions come undone
while words are still wrong
feelings are just as strong

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