You'll never know
how bad you hurt me
My heart is broken now
and it'll never mend
I'll never trust
another guy again
See what you did to me?
See how dead I am?
All I wanna do
is cry my eyes out
All I wanna do
is slit your fucking throat
As for the bitch you like now
I hope you two have fun
The only reason you wanna get with her
is for a piece of ass
So much for my happy ending
I knew it wouldn't last forever
But I never knew it would
end this quickly
I know now that
I'll never be happy
I'll always have no one
And my heart will always be broken
I fucking hate you
I hate her too
I hope you both are happy now
yeah...fuck you.
Author notes
I fucking hate Robert for doing this to me....I'll NEVER forgive him.
Please tell me what you think
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omg u feel exactly what i feel! it seems like one of those written from ur heart poems -theyre the best kind
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this was good because you really expressed how you felt! a great example of how horrible fresh wounds are and how angry people get!! and rightly so! iv been in the same boat as you before so i know how you are feeling thank you for commenting on my poem
much love ana
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Sorry for what Robert did to you... nice way to get back at him... with powerful words from your heart!!!
I enjoyed this for a lot of different reasons, but one of those being that it had nice flow, wording and I enjoy a story like this... even if it is true and sad... I like to see the victim taking some revenge.
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Ugh. Im sorry for what you must be feeling. You write very well. The anger and hurt jumps out at the reader. Writing is a great way to express this kind of emotion, and its good that you let loose like this.
However bad you feel, I guess its important to know you wont always feel that way, it just might take some time. People come in and out of your life, some affect you more than others. You'll probably have your heart broken many times still, and it wont get any easier. I guess you just learn to take what you can from the experience. Just dont shut your heart out. Like the previous comment says, theres someone out there waiting for you
You just might have to go through some jerks to find him.
Keep up the great writing and good luck with everything. I hope you start to hurt less soon.
(Sorry for the epic comment btw)
Take care
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WOWE
This poem was filled with anger... and some form of sorrow as well! Nicely penned... Loved the length of this poem and each line...
i loved the beginnig of this poem! the first stanza was a blast! and it ended with so much rage...
Well, i hope you get well soon(i mean emotionally) You'll find the right guy for you... there's someone out there waiting for you!
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