you
a curled growth
hello sunshine,
fling your dreams
too far to reach.
sweet destroyer
trampling toward your love
salvage the bodies,
& touch the earth.
gingerly
crashing down again,
in a groovy rainfall
passionately wrap your arms.
please don't:
let it die
hold on
let go.
Author notes
Mmmm well this is my letter to a baby. However they would interpret or understand.
Its meant to be very happy, hopeful, mostly waving. It's all about just, thinking too far dreaming too long. Crush everything to find your passion, pick your loves up and drag them with you. Be one with the Earth, feel that savage instinct && follow. Burst with energy, feel the love and that inner hippy that makes you smile. ♥♥♥
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- letter to a baby by CarCrashHumor.
600 points, ended August 11, 2007, 35 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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enjoyable, good energy.
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=D thanks so much, your 3 words and 3 happy yellow heads make me 3 times happier =P!!
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I'm not even sure what to say, but I will answer your question... YES I like it! it's abstract and subtle.
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=] thank u crashums, I never saw this comment until now & its so sweet. I like your descriptions, they are things I like in poems. ^-^ happy you see them in miiiiiiine.
luv you sweets ♥
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its like when you get to someones house and theyre standing on their front porch waving at you.
its like, keep dreaming.
i love it <33
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Thank youuuu so much for commeint on this! No one said anything and I wanted thoughts soooo badly =D. Ahhh I am so happy you loved it and it made you happy. I love you sweets!
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