It took me long enough to find out but I’m out of excuses.
Don’t have anymore thoughts.
I’m so confused…
Wishing I could understand the metaphor of love
For wherever I go I find you there.
And your expression is priceless and almost indescribable,
I wish I knew what you were thinking.
Is it a sign to see you everywhere I go?
Is it destiny to both see us in opposite paths?
Is it coincidence to see you dressed like the first day I met you?
Or is it plain life playing the game of suicide on my heart?
And I’ve come to wish something that will never be,
Such a waste of a wish.
I wished you could believe in me
But of course you know her better than you know me.
Obviously in this place I don’t belong.
I’m the obstacle in her way to get you.
Then again, why should I waste a wish on you?
We both know you may never be mine.
And it hurts so bad to love people who only remain
In your heart because of the wounds they’ve caused.
I feel like I’m falling, deeper and deeper in love with you.
But I can’t allow it. No. I won’t.
I don’t want my heart to suffer no more.
I prefer to be cold and alone.
But eventually the truth will come out.
And even though I may not have you,
I am happy to waste a wish on you.
♥The End♥
Author notes
well this was written today. it kind of made me think of the things that are happening to me and I would like to discuss this feelings with anyone who is willing to listen to me.
A contest entry
- Show me you understand! by Poet of Dreams.
450 points, ended August 12, 2007, 10 entries
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Comments
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heh im old and even I dont know what love is all about, each time ive gone down that road its turned bad after a bit.
Well least you know what you want, well described flowing painted an awesome picture full of detail, over all an excellent emotional driven write.
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the wording was good, and the flow was consistent, but im not big on the form. i prefer more structure and ryhme and rythm to pieces that i read. a good piece, but not my favorite form. good luck in the contest
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I'm sorry that you feel that way, but you can clearly convey your messages. I love it :] Kind of depressing and I can sense your duality over it. How you're caught up in the fact to love him or not to love and you know the fact taht even if you choose not to, you'd only be lying to yourself. good write :]
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vry tgood,i luv it, u can express ur feelings very well, and i will listen to u when ever u need to talk b/c i like to listen and b/c i have notin else to do.
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