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[ The sight of your face ]

The sight of your face
Leaves a bitter taste
A wasted disgrace
Been put in your place
By the human race

Something about the way you walk
Drives me close to insanity
Maybe it's non-sensical talk
yearning to prove your vanity

Do you think I can't see through you
The things you tried so hard to hide
Don't take my silence as your cue
I will never be on your side

The sight of your face
Leaves a bitter taste
A wasted disgrace
Put you in your place
You will lose the race

Nothing but a waste of my time
I can't find a reason to care
This is where I must draw the line
Leave you to die, strip your soul bare

Anger and rage are my best friends
Hate is my burning desire
Reasons not easy to defend
You can not put out this fire

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  • GiftedPsychosis gold member
    August 7, 2007
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    *clap,clap*
    Great! I love the rhymes, they're wonderful.
    Great job and good luck in the contest!