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Solaris

Solaris, as beautifuly bright as the sun
Enlightning her path with beauty and fun
The darkness and light, must find a balance
She and her sister play in Dreams palace
And listen to whispers of mortal desire
In the depth of their sleep, celestrial fire
Found always near where her sister may be
In the darkest of depths, her light is the key
Protecting her sister from any darker force
She'd kill for her blindly, no show of remorse
But only in times of true despiratiopn
Will Solaris step in, to resolve the situation
Watching Lunaris, she stands in the light
While her sister creeps the shadows of night
A bright deadly beauty, tries never to fight
Warding off evil with shimmering divine light

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Lunaris' sister

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  • OktoberSchatten
    August 5, 2007
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    this is just absloutley beautiful....you are amazing with words!


  • Candice Bezanson
    August 4, 2007

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    Oh WOW...Im speechless, I love this a lot it flowed beautifully and told such a beautiful story! great write! I lovd it!


  • Jalalbad gold member
    August 4, 2007
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    you are

    a child of the light yourself precious soul. I reconize you by your write. This one is awesome.


  • moon2u
    August 3, 2007
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    BEAUTIFUL