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Never the Same

A Father gone because of a stupid cancer,
Two Best Friends gone without an answer,

God is calling a lot of People home,
A lot know things while others don't,

I will always be looking forward with my pain,
For my hopes & dreams I had went down the drain,

This isn't fair, This isn't right,
All three of them went into the light,

I am standing here while they fly,
Asking myself & wondering why,

Life will never be the same as it was,
Sadness & despair will come again, it always does.

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Everytime I try to see the positive side of things... memories, anniversaries, birthdays, or just something that reminds me of my three angels knocks me down. Life for me will never be the same & sometimes it hard to realize it.
Written September 6th, 2003

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  • SEA angel gold member
    September 7, 2003
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    Very Good

    Amen...you have had sadness come three times this past year so surely things have to get better but, like you, sometimes it seems like sadness gets around way more than it should and needs to be stopped with some happiness stopping by a little more often.


  • September 7, 2003
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    I am just soooo sorry!!! Here are some hugs for you
    Another amazingly written poem from one of my favorite poets!!
    Love to ya!
    ~~Mary Anne~~


  • Bluestar
    September 7, 2003
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    I understand completely what you mean, but I have learnt that whenever I am reminded by something of my best friend, I will block out the memories of her passing away and will only concentrate on the good times that we shared. I found that this really helps and helps to deal with the situation better.
    Another beautifully touching write - keep them coming
    Much love to you
    ~*blue*~
    xxx xxx


  • FlawedDestiny
    September 6, 2003
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    Awww that's so touching.. I'm still sorry for your pair poor thing.
    ~*Flawed Destiny*~