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Me

Me?
I am a dissapointer.
A Failer.
With dark eyes.
My forever frown.
I am scary.

Me?
I am a comforter.
A Protector.
With listening ears.
And a careing heart.
I am tender.

Me?
I am a keeper.
A holder.
With small hands.
And a strong determination.
I am a lock.

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I wrote this as a picture of myself acording to me and maybe other peoples.

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  • just mercedes gold member
    July 2, 2008

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    No wonder you disappoint, you have posted a poem without spellcheck, without grammar, and without any real idea of what you are trying to say. Your third line is very good.


    • DestinyLies
      July 2, 2008
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      Excuse me..it won't take me to spell check. And how would you know what I"m trying to say????Thank you for the encouragement.