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Theif of hearts

i wish you could feel what i feel now
but i know you never will
you say your sorry
but i still dont believe you
seeing you with him it doesnt hurt me anymore
go ahead and be that whore everyone prefers
its ok i dont feel what was once pain
but i still say your name over and over
and pretend like its the last time ill ever think of you
and pray that time wont exist
and hope when i look into your soul
i dont see that girl
i thought i once knew
and it is true the past gets the best of you
never again will it get the best of me
ill promise you that
and when i take your heart away
your never getting it back

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  • Jessica Lyndsay
    August 14, 2007
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    Great write! You have done a marvolus job with the emotions you feel!! I get what you are saying and relationships don't always work acording to plan but it will work out in the end and you will be happy once more!! Keep up the good work and feel free to check out my page anytime!! Jess


  • lesbian-in-love
    August 14, 2007
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    oh my lesbians i loved this poem. i have so been there and experienced that. good write keep it up.