you gave him head
while i thought of you in my head
i was soo fucking dumb to think that you were "The One"
i was so fucking stupid
that i thought i was struck by cupid
they told me everything you said
they told me everything you did
some friend, some lover
WHILE I LOVED YOU, YOU LOVED ANOTHER
those memorable nights i takeback now
i hate you now im never looking back now
i regret everything EVEN THE SONGS ABOUT YOU
ill repent anything even the sins that surround you
i hope My heart IS the LAst one you break
because you and me were just a big mistake
you say you did nothing but you know what you did
but now i dont know you i dont know where you've been
you changed but ill always miss the old you
now we're like strangers with old but new lives
if i hated you i would say i hope you choked and i died
but i wont be who you want me to be
ill be like its always been
so me because my aches
but not for you, for someone elses sake
goodbye now and forever
to my last love i wont forget her
Please tell me what you think
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i hate that part. the part that ye are thinking of her wi' someone else. i dinna ken why it is so hard for a lass to stay wi' another lass... seems that eventually they want to try out... different. and that is all fine and well, but someone always gets hurt do they no, and 'twould be the one who gi' all of theiere heart. but dinna say that she will be the last, simply that she was a learning block, and that... mayhap, was an inevitable part of ye learning about yourself and what ye will do, settle for. at least, i prefer to look at it as such, but i own copious quantities of rose coloured glasses. i hurt for the love that ye lost, but smile for the strength that ye 'ave... and now ye can find one... i'll no say more deserving... cause i dinna ken either player in this... but mayhap, find someone that might fit better.
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good write. very emotional. my relationship with my ex gf want something like what you wrote about. though i new she was with the guy but it hurt me once he broke up with her and she got back with him. i love the last line to my last love i wont forget her. my ex gf was my first true love though it was complicanted and all. i enjoyed reading it.
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