It looked as lonely as I did.
Up there on that barren tree.
Me in my pure white dress.
It with the red color.
So I shall pick it
And put it behind my ear,
So we both won't be lonely
Author notes
pic prompt. 1
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie: 10/40/30 by FallingTwilight.
450 points, ended August 3, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
-
definite brevity to this piece
you've managed to say a lot without really saying too much at all... well done
-
Interesting take on the prompt. Can you put the number in the author notes please?
Thank you for your entry and Good luck!
FallenPoeticAngel
-
Prompt is up, good luck!
Adding your comment:
