Such innocence in her soul
And sadness upon her face
As she searches for love
Stumbling on a tree of hearts
She gently took one
A young man appeared
Smiling, taking her hand
Her fairytale has begun
Love is found
Author notes
Prompt 1, 40 words
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie: 10/40/30 by FallingTwilight.
450 points, ended August 3, 2007, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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beautiful.love how it goes from kinda dark and depressing to really light and airy at the end.great contrast.i love it.
~marianna
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wow
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Interesting take on the prompt.
I love to find out what other people see in this picture. I think everyone can see something different. I like your take very much. Good luck!
FallenPoeticAngel
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Prompt is up, good luck!
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