It hurts so bad,
I just dont understand,
If it hurts so much,
Then why do we fall in love?
We look at love,
Like nothingness,
Like a leaf in the wind,
But its more then that,
Dont you understand?
Author notes
no notes really, Just a poem for a contest lol.
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie: 10/40/30 by FallingTwilight.
450 points, ended August 3, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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" 'Love is knowing that someone can hurt you and will, and still letting it in' 'Love is suicide then?'"
nice. It's true, something I find less and less now a days... But few understand.. They don't bother.. Their only goal is to hurt. -
Awww ... honey ... this is such a lovely poem ... so sad ... but so beautiful in it's words ... you are such a loving person ... and it's so true ... a lot of us look at love ... being a leaf in the wind ... it just floats right by you ... and sometimes ... you just can't catch in time ... very well done ... and very beatifully penned ... Good Luck 2 Ya! ... Much Love ... Sparkeh
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thanks lots. ^.^ luv ya candy babeh
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yeah i love that line leaf in the wind
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thanks lot
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The prompt's not up yet...
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What do you meen? Did i enter to early?
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You can't have written something already if I didn't give you a prompt.
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but... but.. I thoght u did... i worked hard.. 40 words in.. 30 minutes.. its har di worked so hard.
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Sorry, but you're supposed to reserve a spot, wait for all the entries, then you get a prompt, from which to be inspired.
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i was inspired damnit. by my friend david! GR. SO I HAVE TO MAKE A NEW ONE?!
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This is a quickie contest. You reserve a space and yo uwait for the host to give you a prompt, or topic to write about. So, you couldn't have written anything yet.
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i didnt know!
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It's alright, you can edit it.
The prompts are up on the main page now. Good luck.
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