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Metonym For Death

On a dark and stormy night
In a wedding dress soaked with her sobs
She chose the heart
From the forbidden tree
Suffocating, dying
Of a love that never lasted
She met her metonym for death
And wilted at last.

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  • Number 13
    August 3, 2007
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    beautiul


  • FallingTwilight
    August 3, 2007

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    Oh, wonderful take on the prompt. I always wonder what other people see in that picture... I think everyone sees a different story. I like your take very much. Good luck!

    FallenPoeticAngel


  • FallingTwilight
    August 3, 2007
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    Prompt is up, good luck!