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No Justice

So long I have lived in agony,
The years never seem to want to go by,
I pray to wake up blind tomorrow,
Lest I see more of my brothers and sisters die.

We've only ever kept to ourselves,
Never to leave this place.
But the next thing you know,
We've vanished without a trace

They've slung us across their back
In their worldwide mockery,
Maybe there's a price tag above our heads
Otherwise, a shameful robbery.

They're fueling their arms more heartlessly,
Happily blasting through Mother and baby, with Hearts of Stone
Maybe mankind likes taking life,
Whenever it's feeling most alone?

So, If I cry out to this murder,
It'll overflow red over green,
I'd be dead by tomorrow...
An assassination, covered up and never seen.

Author notes

**** [JUST TO WARN YOU AGAIN, SOME PEOPLE MAY FIND THIS UPSETTING. I KNOW I DID WRITING IT! SO PLEASE TAKE THAT IN MIND IF YOU ARE ONE OF THOSE PEOPLE CONCERNED!] ****
^ Yeah people normally don't do this, but I'm just taking precautions cause I know some people can be touchy about the subject ...

Hmm.. let me go over the weird circumstances that lead up to this out of character poem.

I wanted to do something more cheerful and glorifying at first about my favorite animal, the Panda! ^_^ Cuties!! Anyway, I was doing some research for that piece and I read a section about the Panda's near extinction and the people who would hunt these beautiful animals. Of course, this touched me and I wanted to write something about it and because anything depressing is my comfort zone, I chose to do this. ^^;;

The Panda is the victim in this and I tried to imagine what it must be like to be hunted like that so I've tried to write from that perspective. Believe me it wasn't easy in so many ways. Hopefully by the end of this, you can see just how terrible and disgusting this is (incase you didn't think so). Or you can interpret in whatever way you want.. meh ...

Anyway, try to enjoy ... BTW, every 2nd and 4th line rhymes. Just putting that in incase you're an idiot and can't figure it out. ^^;;; lol

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Comments

  • P.o.e.t
    August 8, 2007

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    You and your panda's

    lol its a new perspective of writing from you, nice to read it good job


  • jfluffy
    August 8, 2007

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    O gosh

    lol unbelievable u wnt to rite sumfin like dis bt its reali gd extremli i ave to say it puts acros de pain wel dne!!