Listen to the rain drops,
And listen to there sound,
As the fall from the clouds,
And drop to the ground,
Listen to there beat,
From silent to thounderouse roar,
Sometimes its just a trinkle,
Other times its just a pour,
Listen to the raindrops,
As they fall from heaven,
First 1 then 2, 3then 4,
5,6,and 7
Listen to the raindrops,
Siletn and resign,
Inspiring my thought,
And invading my mind,
Author notes
July-11-2007
A contest entry
- Photo Inspired (Rain, Love, Nature, Beaches, The Moon, Sunsets, etc....) by Sally the Ragdoll.
600 points, ended September 23, 2007, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Kiss The Rain by Sokarjo.
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Comments
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Inspiring my thought,
And invading my mind
Like how you ended it. Good one. Thanks for your entry.
S -
Nice poem! Just a few suggestions...
In stanzas 1 and 2, "there" should be "their". Also "silent" is misspelled in the last stanza.
-Sally
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