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Whispering winds...

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Today the wind still blows
in me... in my heart
It tears up pieces
every sad day
I have to walk
this long and lonely road
With so much still to say
after my struggle
to move further
against this strong wind
While its whistle  
is silencing me
suffocating my voice...
no cry will be loud enough
to let you know
how much love
still blows in my heart
in me...


And to know only the
soft whispering winds
are hearing me,

just brakes me
into million pieces…

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

4. write about a time when you could actually hear your heart break...you didn't know that you could ever love again...you felt broken into a tiny million pieces or more.

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No cry will be loud enough to let you know...

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  • redhanded
    December 12, 2008

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    very good write you have here. it is full of emotions that I can relate to and is very well pen'd. thanks so much for your entry and best of luck to you in the future and with your writing.
    andi
    (redhanded)


  • BleedingBlackTears
    November 30, 2008
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    wonderful. i love it


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    January 30, 2008

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    Wow. This is one of those poems that actually makes you choke back tears due to not only the intense sorrow, but the beautiful emotion.
    Congratulations on your HM, it was well deserved.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~


  • songstress80
    December 26, 2007
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    such a sad poem, yet it's words ring so much truth. beautiful poem. very touching.


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    December 25, 2007

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    this is beautifully written and holdsa a deep emotion within your words. well done and congrats on the honary


  • Breathing-Fate
    December 25, 2007

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    i really like this you are definetely talented
    "after my struggle
    to move further
    against this strong wind
    While its whistle
    is silencing me
    Suffocating my voice
    No cry will be loud enough"
    i like this ~~~~~Fate


  • SilverButterfly gold member
    December 23, 2007

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    this is a heartbreaker! but it's also a fantastic write. You've penned a perfect piece my friend!!!

    GBY
    SilverButterfly


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    December 20, 2007

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    still so lovely and sad just commenting again for the group


  • Keyser Soze
    December 19, 2007
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    Whistling wind as a silencer, good call... good call.


  • LadyShiva
    December 18, 2007

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    *sigh* what an emotional piece. I loved the flow and the imagery. Very intense poem. Thanks for sharing.

    Lauren

  • Nighttime angel
    December 12, 2007

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    I loved this poem that you wrote. I have read it several times over. my favorite lines were these ones:

    how much love
    still blows in my heart
    And to know only the
    soft whispering winds
    are hearing me,

    just brakes me
    into million pieces…

    this poem was so full of sadness, I cried.
    To my Three Little Moons, you can tell me anything, I will be there no matter to listen. just know that you are loved and cared about. but most of all you matter to me.

    kat


    • Wolf Mistress silver member
      December 12, 2007
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      Thnxs Kat...it's always good to know people do care for you...and I know you do care for me...
      Sometimes sadness is all what is in my mind, or more like sadness is all I can write about...but things change,my life changed..and now there is more happy stuff to write about

      Luv ya
      J


  • Blue Spirit
    December 12, 2007
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    nice poem. very lonely and touching


  • fathom me
    August 7, 2007

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    Sad and full of yearning I'm gonna cry.. Sometimes I wonder whether we must indulge in feeling so much or hold ourselves back after feeling, knowing n understanding just enough.. just my thoughts...
    Wonderful write


  • poet2angels gold member
    August 7, 2007

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    Such a beautiful piece....
    The emotions are clearly felt through every line of this....
    Great job!
    Lynda


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    August 4, 2007

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    as i was already in darkend stupor my friend this one brought me tears,sad....i an feel the pain in evry word..i am .....i will speak to you soon...
    Much love and hugs
    Tory


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    August 4, 2007

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    Please pass the tissues tears are flowing and a tightness in this heart...You have penned the most wonderfully sad poem...hugs for you and your tender heart

  • Eulb kcalB
    August 3, 2007

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    this piece is...so heatbreakingly beautiful...your talent just keeps on growing and growing Jeannette I feel so proud of you and they way you express yourself love..this you have masteres eloquently well... much love to you my friend

    luv
    Jamila


  • wattle silver member
    August 3, 2007

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    Oh wow a vulnerable Ms Wolfy in need of reassurance. A good long rub around her ears and perhaps even across her breastplate from kind hands would do the trick. ---- Your poetry offers yourself as proof of the subject matter. When reading, everyone falls in love with your poetry; you, you are one and the same. – Beautiful, you are pictured with such elegance, in my mind’s eye. ---- Thank you.


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    August 3, 2007
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    such beautiful words you weave filled with such sadness.

    but remember " to the world you may only be one person, but to one person you may be the world"

    twinny


  • Beating gold member
    August 3, 2007
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    Ooops... I forgot the clappers!


  • Beating gold member
    August 3, 2007

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    "No cry will be loud enough
    to let you know"
    I love those lines. Just now I realise that the lines are above this box. They are so beautiful! This whole piece really compliments that, and I felt really haunted as I was reading this. Whispers. So spooky!


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    August 3, 2007

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    Wow sweetie You describe your pain and deep love and emotions so vividly. Your reader just wants to wrap you in a blanket of compassion and soothe your wounded heart. Well written. Good luck in the contest.

    Jeannie

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