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- Catatonic Communication -

 

 

Carcinogenic cadaver ~
      poison ivy halo hovering,

             ascends...

                   catatonic guide
      

        righteous path of persecution
               Souls bounty hunter- 
                    

Addicts ---->Narcotics 

          Scapegoat



         when waiter hissed-
             carbon dioxide special

                      Radiated plate

                              served seven sins. 
                            







   

 

Author notes

Prompt:
Toxic Whispers

Thirty words...

In a list

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  • Whoochi gold member
    August 4, 2007

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    wowza! another gold, your muse is on fire...can relate to this prompt and agin your words....have heard such toxic whispers and been a part of! well done, genius!


  • ms-cuddles silver member
    August 3, 2007

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    Congrats Again

    Sounds like this was one hell of a party..... lol Thanks for NOT inviting me. Your take on the prompt was wonderful. I would have never came up with something like this. My brain is still frozen. Hugs~ Cuddles


  • StarEyes
    August 3, 2007

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    Holy Moly!!!!! What a read this one is!!!! Just incredible! Congrats on the well deserved Gold!!!!

    and much love

    Nettie


  • penman gold member
    August 3, 2007
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    Excellent

    Oh my precious, congrats on your gold. It was most deserved!


  • Kyn
    August 3, 2007
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    Good stuff! This was great!


  • kiwikrazi37
    August 3, 2007

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    Very well written! And the vocabulary is very advanced...I don't even know what 3/4 of these words mean lol.


  • Twins 4 me
    August 3, 2007
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    very good! Excellent feeling and imagery in this. Thanks for entering!


  • Riftkin gold member
    August 3, 2007

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    Radiated plate
    served seven sins.


    where is this place I think I need to visit it and see if my muse is hiding there.


  • hoodoolover silver member
    August 3, 2007

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    What an excellent take on the prompt, your alliteration is always top notch, right along with your imagery, nice work!

  • Twins 4 me
    August 3, 2007
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    Prompt: Toxic whispers

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