Poisonous snickers
surround at every corner,
they don't understand...
I wish they could see
what it's like to be me,
It's just unfair
Do you have to sit and stare?
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie! 10x30x30 by Twins 4 me.
450 points, ended August 3, 2007, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Spooky.Just joking. sometimes i feel that way too. Sometimes I wish i could be in someone elses body to see how their life is. And so the person's body and life im in will go into mine.
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Nice emotion captured in this piece! Thanks for entering!
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I wish they could see
what it's like to be me,
It's just unfair
this is what everyone feels at times
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Prompt: Toxic whispers
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