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Silent Pleasure

Your silent speech engulfs
deadly passions deep within.
Venomous breezes call me
as fires prison takes hold.

Lightly sculpting romance
into beauty from your lips.

Pleasing my heart deeply inside.

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Prompt:Toxic whispers~30 words

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  • Riftkin gold member
    August 3, 2007

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    Lightly sculpting romance
    into beauty from your lips.

    Pleasing my heart deeply inside.

    a gentle take for a loving kiss


  • Twins 4 me
    August 3, 2007
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    Beautifully written. Excellent images. Thanks for eentering

    • CherylAnn
      August 3, 2007
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      Thank you for the wonderful comment,glad you liked it...
      Blessings
      ~Cheryl~

  • Twins 4 me
    August 3, 2007
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    Beautifully written. Excellent images. Thanks for entering!


  • FallingTwilight
    August 3, 2007

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    Great take on the prompt, I love your choice of words. Good Luck!

    FallenPoeticAngel


  • Forlorn Dreams
    August 3, 2007
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    Wonderful take on the prompt, best wishes in the contest!
    Kelcey

  • Twins 4 me
    August 3, 2007
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    Prompt: Toxic whispers

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